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The bar chart illustrates the approximate production capacity of oil in several Gulf countries for four different years.

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The bar chart illustrates the approximate production capacity of oil in several Gulf countries for four different years. Units are mentioned in millions of VBarrels produced a day. Overall, throughout the recorded timeframe, Saudi Arabia led the manufacturing rate in the first place whereas Qatar turned out to be the country with the least amount of oil production. According to the given graph, the estimated portion of produced oil in Iran and Iraq experienced the similar patterns, starting off with 3 millions and 2 millions in 1990, increased gradually over the period and ending at over 4 millions and nearly 4 millions in 2010, respectively. As in Kuwait, oil manufacturing seemed a little less than the aforementioned countries and yet, followed the similar trend by beginning at over only a million, increasing moderately and then, resulting in 3 millions at the end. On the other hand, the capacity in UAE remained quite static over the first recorded decade before finally increasing a million in 2005 and another half a million in the next five years. Among all countries, Saudi Arabia stood out unrivaled. From the beginning of the timeframe, it surpassed all other countries with over 8 millions of barrels per day. Keeping up this rate, it reached its peak in 2010, accounting for over 14 millions in total. Similarly, the production in Qatar was also significant but for an opposite reason. It barely started at a million, made it to a million in 2000 before hitting a low of half a million again by the end of the period.
The bar chart illustrates the approximate production capacity of
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oil
in several Gulf
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countries
for four
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different
years. Units
are mentioned
in
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millions
of
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VBarrels
produced a day.

Overall
, throughout the recorded timeframe, Saudi Arabia led the manufacturing rate in the
first
place whereas Qatar turned out to be the
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country
with the least amount of
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oil
production.

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given
graph, the estimated portion of produced
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oil
in Iran and Iraq experienced the similar patterns, starting off with 3
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millions
and 2
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millions
in 1990, increased
gradually
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over
the period and ending at
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over
4
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millions
and
nearly
4
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millions
in 2010,
respectively
. As in Kuwait,
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oil
manufacturing seemed a
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little
less than the aforementioned
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countries
and
yet
, followed the similar trend by beginning at
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over
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only
a
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million
, increasing
moderately
and then, resulting in 3
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millions
at the
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end
.
On the other hand
, the capacity
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remained quite static
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over
the
first
recorded decade
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before
finally
increasing a
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million
in 2005 and another half a
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million
in the
next
five years.

Among all
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countries
, Saudi Arabia stood out unrivaled. From the beginning of the timeframe, it surpassed all other
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countries
with
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over
8
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millions
of barrels per day. Keeping up this rate, it reached its peak in 2010, accounting for
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over
14
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millions
in total.
Similarly
, the production in Qatar was
also
significant
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but
for an opposite reason. It
barely
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started
at a
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million
, made it to a
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million
in 2000
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before
hitting a low of half a
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million
again by the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the approximate production capacity of oil in several Gulf countries for four different years.

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