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The line graph illustrates the changes that took place in the proportions of the exported coffee from three different countries over a decade and units mentioned in the graph are in millions of kilograms.

The line graph illustrates the changes that took place in the proportions of the exported coffee from three different countries over a decade and units mentioned in the graph are in millions of kilograms. VEmg3
The line graph illustrates the changes that took place in the proportions of the exported coffee from three different countries over a decade and units mentioned in the graph are in millions of kilograms. Overall, despite the fact that some fluctuations took place, the amount in all countries somehow increased over the period. Brazil and Costa Rica starting rates had only a slight difference, amounting to 12 millions and 15 millions, respectively. Brazil continued by experiencing a gradual increasing trend until it peaked at 25 millions in 2012, the most amount of coffee among all the countries. Costa Rica, on the other hand, declined in its proportion of coffee exportation until 2006 when it hit a low of only around 7 millions. This rate then rose moderately and by the end of the recorded timeframe, exports of coffee in Costa Rica made it to 15 millions. To compare with the other two countries, Colombia is seen to be the country that exports the least quantity of coffee, starting at only 5 millions in 2002. This quantity rose for a while until 2006 when it surpasses Costa Rica with 11 millions. However, it faced the fluctuations again and ended up at only 15 millions in 2012, being the country that exports the least coffee just as it had been from the beginning.
The line graph illustrates the
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that took place in the proportions of the exported
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from three
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over a decade and units mentioned in the graph are in
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of kilograms.
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fluctuations took place, the amount in all
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somehow increased over the period.

Brazil and Costa Rica starting rates had
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a slight difference, amounting to 12
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and 15
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,
respectively
. Brazil continued by experiencing a gradual increasing trend until it peaked at 25
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in 2012, the most amount of
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coffee
among all the
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countries
. Costa Rica,
on the other hand
, declined in its proportion of
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coffee
exportation until 2006 when it hit a low of
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around 7
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millions
. This rate then rose
moderately
and by the
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of the recorded timeframe, exports of
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in Costa Rica made it to 15 millions.

To compare with the other two
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, Colombia is
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seen
to be the
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that exports the least quantity of
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, starting at
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5
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millions
in 2002. This quantity rose for a while until 2006 when it surpasses Costa Rica with 11
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.
However
, it faced the fluctuations again and ended up at
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15
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in 2012, being the
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country
that exports the least
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as it had been from the beginning.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the changes that took place in the proportions of the exported coffee from three different countries over a decade and units mentioned in the graph are in millions of kilograms.

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