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Rating the importance of car features

Rating the importance of car features LGjM8
The bar chart gives information about rating car features including: sun roof, color, airbag, stereo system, alarm and air conditioning. Overall, the stereo system is the least important for Linh. While the least necessary feature for class is sun roof. Also, the most considerable part for Linh and class is airbag. It is clear that the second most significant part for Linh is air conditioning. Then the alarm is a little more crucial than the sun roof. And she doesn’t care about the color Besides, the class chooses the color for the second most substantial section of a car. Next, the third most important feature is air conditioning. Because the class s’ least meaningful part is the sun roof, the fourth most significant one is the stereo system In conclusion, Linh and the class s’ first priority is safety.
The bar chart gives information about rating car features including:
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sun
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roof
, color, airbag, stereo system, alarm and air conditioning.
Overall
, the stereo system is the least
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important
for
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Linh
. While the least necessary feature for
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class
is
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sun
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roof
.
Also
, the most considerable part for
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Linh
and
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class
is airbag.

It is
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clear
that the second most significant part for
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Linh is
air conditioning. Then the alarm is a
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little
more crucial than the
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sun
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roof
. And she doesn’t care about the
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color


Besides
, the
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class
chooses the color for the second most substantial section of a car.
Next
, the third most
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important
feature is air conditioning.
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Because
the
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class
s’ least meaningful part is the
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sun
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roof
, the fourth most significant one is the stereo
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system


In conclusion
,
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Linh
and the
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class
s’
first
priority is safety.
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IELTS academic Rating the importance of car features

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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