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Given in the bar chart are figures related to how many male and female teachers in six types of educational institutions in The UK in 2010.

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Given in the bar chart are figures related to how many male and female teachers in six types of educational institutions in The UK in 2010. As can be seen, while females teaching in primary education comprised about 98%, their male counterparts constituted only 2%. It was particularly true of nursery school, where the similar gap was recorded, with figures being 92% and about 8%. The rate of Secondary school’s teachers were women towered that in men by 5%. The same gap, although in an opposite order, was seen in Private training institutes ( 45% to 55% ). The proportion of the College’s male and female masters mirrored each other, which was 50%. Meanwhile, the percentage of male professors in University was twice that for females.

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