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Skills drivers rate most difficult

Skills drivers rate most difficult MBAVa

The graph shows information about what drivers rate most difficult which includes 5 issues: reversing, parking, keeping to speed limit, hill starts and other. The most noticeable feature is that the highest percentage of drivers rate parking as the hardest thing while the least challenging thing for drivers is other issues. It is clear that the second toughest is reversing. there are more than 30% of car users rate it. Then the keeping to speed limit is more problematic than hill starts because the proportion of car owner rating keeping to speed limit is more about 10% than the one rating hill starts. In conclusion, parking is easier said than done.

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 information about what drivers rate most difficult which includes 5 issues: reversing, parking, keeping to speed limit, hill This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 and other. The most noticeable feature is that the highest percentage of drivers rate parking as the hardest thing while the least challenging thing for drivers is other issues.

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 the proportion of car owner rating keeping to speed limit is more about 10% than the one rating hill This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
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In conclusion
, parking is easier said than done. 

IELTS academic Skills drivers rate most difficult

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

111 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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