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Skills drivers rate most difficult

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The graph shows information about what drivers rate most difficult which includes 5 issues: reversing, parking, keeping to speed limit, hill starts and other. The most noticeable feature is that the highest percentage of drivers rate parking as the hardest thing while the least challenging thing for drivers is other issues. It is clear that the second toughest is reversing. there are more than 30% of car users rate it. Then the keeping to speed limit is more problematic than hill starts because the proportion of car owner rating keeping to speed limit is more about 10% than the one rating hill starts. In conclusion, parking is easier said than done.
The graph
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information about what drivers rate most difficult which includes 5 issues: reversing, parking, keeping to speed limit, hill
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starts
and other. The most noticeable feature is that the highest percentage of drivers rate parking as the hardest thing while the least challenging thing for drivers is other issues.

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that the second toughest is reversing.
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are more than 30% of car users rate it. Then the keeping to speed limit is more problematic than hill
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starts
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the proportion of car owner rating keeping to speed limit is more about 10% than the one rating hill
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starts
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In conclusion
, parking is easier said than done.
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IELTS academic Skills drivers rate most difficult

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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