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The bar chart illustrates on the rate of British people expenditure to charity by 5 different age ranges in the years 1990 and 2010.

The bar chart illustrates on the rate of British people expenditure to charity by 5 different age ranges in the years 1990 and 2010. xx3gw
The bar chart illustrates the rate of British people expenditure to charity by 5 different age ranges in the years 1990 and 2010. Overall, the highest charity was came from group of 36-50 in 1990, whereas, the lowest charity expenditure was seen in 2010 from group of 18-25. In 1990, the highest money of charity from group of 36-50, which rate was just above 40%. The second highest expenditure rate was 35% by group of 51-65. The group of 65+ rate was similiar with group of 51-65 and they percantege at about 32%. Group of 26-35 makes up about 31% in given graph. The lowest charity given from group of 18-25, which rate was approximantely 17%. In 2010, group of 51-65 has the highest percentage of charity with just under 40%. Group of 65+ and 36-50 make up same ratio, which rate were 35%. Group of 26-35 had the second lowest percentage of charity expenditure, they rate were about 24%. The lowest charity money spending were given from group of 18-25, which percentage was about 6%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates on the rate of British people expenditure to charity by 5 different age ranges in the years 1990 and 2010.

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