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The bar chart gives information about the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries namely England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The bar chart gives information about the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries namely England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. rbOXL
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries namely England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It is noticeable that households in owned accommodation increased over the period shown. By contrast, households in rented accommodation decreased between 1918 and 2011. In the year 1918, there was a big difference between the percentage of people who rented houses and people who owned houses in two countries. The proportion of households owning accommodation was the smallest in the period, just 22%. However, the percentage of households renting accommodation was the highest, at 79%. A sharp rise was seen in the percentage of households in owned accommodation from 1918 to 2001. The number of people who rented accommodation dropped significantly between 1918 and 2001. By the year 1971, there were the same number of people who bought houses and rented houses. In the year 2001, the number of people who bought houses had reached a peak of approximately 70%. At the same time, the figure for people who rented houses hit a low of 31%.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of
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households
in
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
in two countries
namely
England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

It is noticeable that
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
increased over the period shown. By contrast,
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households
in rented
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accommodation
decreased between 1918 and 2011.

In the year 1918, there was a
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big
difference between the percentage of
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people
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who
rented
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houses
and
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people
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who
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owned
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houses
in two countries. The proportion of
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households
owning
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accommodation
was the smallest in the period,
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just
22%.
However
, the percentage of
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households
renting
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accommodation
was the highest, at 79%. A sharp rise was
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seen
in the percentage of
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households
in
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owned
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accommodation
from 1918 to 2001. The number of
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people
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who
rented
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accommodation
dropped
significantly
between 1918 and 2001.

By the year 1971, there were the same number of
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people
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who
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bought
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houses
and rented
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houses
. In the year 2001, the number of
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people
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who
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bought
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houses
had reached a peak of approximately 70%. At the same time, the figure for
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people
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who
rented
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houses
hit a low of 31%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about the proportion of households in owned and rented accommodation in two countries namely England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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