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The bar chart gives information about the number of travel abroad by Japanese people while the line graph shows the percentage of Japanese tourists coming to Australia in ten consecutive years starting from 1985.

The bar chart gives information about the number of travel abroad by Japanese people while the line graph shows the percentage of Japanese tourists coming to Australia in ten consecutive years starting from 1985. alyAY
The bar chart gives information about the number of travel abroad by Japanese people while the line graph shows the percentage of Japanese tourists coming to Australia in ten consecutive years starting from 1985. Overall, an upward trend can be observed in two charts over the period in question. It is also noticeable that Japanese travelers were more and more interested in Australia to make a trip between 1985 and 1995. Starting at around 5 million people traveled abroad, which grew steadily to 11 million in five years later. Then it decreased slightly by 200 thousand visitors in 1991 before climbing significantly to over 15 million in the last year, which was triple compared to the figure in 1985. Likewise, the number of Japanese visitors who chose Australia for their trip rose dramatically to nearly 5% in the first year, and then it dropped to 4. 2% in 1990, after which it reached a peak of 6. 2% in 1994. In the final year, it returned to 6% of Japanese travelers coming to Australia.
The bar chart gives information about the number of travel abroad by Japanese
people
while the line graph
shows
the percentage of Japanese tourists coming to Australia in ten consecutive years starting from 1985.

Overall
, an upward trend can
be observed
in two charts over the period in question. It is
also
noticeable that Japanese travelers were more and more interested in Australia to
make
a trip between 1985 and 1995.

Starting at around 5 million
people
traveled abroad, which grew
steadily
to 11 million in five years later. Then it decreased
slightly
by 200 thousand visitors in 1991
before
climbing
significantly
to over 15 million in the last
year
, which was triple compared to the figure in 1985.

Likewise
, the number of Japanese visitors who chose Australia for their trip rose
dramatically
to
nearly
5% in the
first
year
, and then it dropped to 4. 2% in 1990, after which it reached a peak of 6. 2% in 1994. In the final
year
, it returned to 6% of Japanese travelers coming to Australia.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about the number of travel abroad by Japanese people while the line graph shows the percentage of Japanese tourists coming to Australia in ten consecutive years starting from 1985.

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