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"Does a terminally ill person have the right to request a death?"

"Does a terminally ill person have the right to request a death? " 2RQKj
Many people have debated whether a terminally ill person have the right to request a death. In my opinion, I agree with this idea. In fact, many terminally ill patients preferred death rather than suffering from medicines and pain. With their deteriorating health, they were no longer able to enjoy their life, some of them even unable to talk or move. They then became depressed and chose to die. When we were not able to do anything for them, we at least should respect their choices. It may not easy for the doctors who were trying their best but this is, maybe, the best thing we can do.
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. They then became depressed and chose to
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this is, maybe, the best thing we can do.
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IELTS academic "Does a terminally ill person have the right to request a death? "

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108 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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