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The ban
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gooph
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sepresents
the outer of omen country

& exports in distinct
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sectors
during 2015

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G

for

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to
2016
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whenous
, the
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tubulaz
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dala
composes the
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percentage
of
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change
. In of exports each
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catego
2016 compared with 2015
Overall
, it is
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clear
from the graph that the
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eerning
export in the
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year
2016 was the most significant
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sector
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heaicos
, the
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percentage
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change
in gems and
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jewellery
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tratues
was gone
-down.
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declined


To
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begin
with, in the years 2016, petroleum merchandise
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sector
. In Tall which the was
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weis
agricultural decreased the most significant over earning,
respectively
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63$
.
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.
Moreover
, products and textiles.
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by
3o & billions which half of
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petocleum
manufacturing.

Additionally
, in 2016, textiles around
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sector
was.
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27$
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billichs
. The second
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Lepist
contribution made by engineered
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goods
which's was in
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year
2016 57%, and hiked by 63.
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in
the
next
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year
2016.

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, textiles
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sector
most significant In was
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sector
in all over
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changes
.
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rate
. Which
was received
15. 24% of the total
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of
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changed
in late.
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furthermore
, engineered
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goods
. 1
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chunge
the rate was about 8. 5%.
However
,
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the.
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area
of gems and
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jewellery
.
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was
gone, down by 5. 18%, although agricultural products and petroleum
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manufactring
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sector
.
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was
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stidely
rinse up by 0. 81% and 3%.
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.
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214 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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