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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar chart report presents the percentage of different gender and age groups who practiced fitness often in Australia in 2010. In general, the male teenager between 15 to 24 is by far the leader for doing physical activity regularly and the adult men age between 35 to 44 took the last place. Not only is this point clear, but women adults start to participate actively in sports when they are 45 to 54, while they least active when they reached 65 and above. Notably, males between 15 to 24 led the age group in practicing sports by about 52. 8%, which is 10. 6% more than males aged between 25 to 34, and the men age 35 to 44 not far behind with about 13. 3%. The reversal trend can be seen for women because the percentage gradually increases as the age group increase. Women with age group 45 to 54 exceed the men by 10. 2% and same goes to the female age between 55 to 64 which surpassed the male with the same age group by about 7. 9%. On a final note of comparison, the percentage of male and female with age 65 and above not that much difference with 46. 7% for male which is only 0. 4% less than female.
The following bar chart report presents the percentage of
different
gender and
age
groups
who practiced fitness
often
in Australia in 2010.

In general
, the male
teenager
between 15 to 24
is by far the leader for doing physical activity
regularly
and the adult
men
age
between 35 to 44
took the last place. Not
only
is this point
clear
,
but
women adults
start
to participate
actively
in sports when they are 45 to 54, while they least active when they reached 65 and above.

Notably
,
males
between 15 to 24
led the
age
group
in practicing sports by about 52. 8%, which is 10. 6% more than
males
aged
between 25 to 34
, and the
men
age
35 to 44 not far behind with about 13. 3%. The reversal trend can be
seen
for women
because
the percentage
gradually
increases as the
age
group
increase.

Women with
age
group
45 to 54 exceed the
men
by 10. 2% and same goes to the female
age
between 55 to 64
which surpassed the male with the same
age
group
by about 7. 9%. On a final note of comparison, the percentage of male and female with
age
65 and above not that much difference with 46. 7% for male which is
only
0. 4% less than female.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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