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The bar chart gives information about how many people visited New York through three main airports, for six years period between 1995-2000.

The bar chart gives information about how many people visited New York through three main airports, for six years period between 1995-2000. RN2QM
The bar chart gives information about how many people visited New York through three main airports, for six years period between 1995-2000. Overall, during this period there was weird trend in the number of John F. Kennedy airport. Other interesting point is that LaGuardia airport was the most famous at the end. In detail, the number of visitors at John F. Kennedy airport began at 26 million in 1995, and then increased remarkably to 47 million in 1997. In 1999, this quantity collapsed to 32 million. At the last year, there was little growth to 44 million. On the other hand, LaGuardia reach the summit at 68 million travellers. However, if we look at Newark airport, it began at the lowest point of 16 million travellers in the first year. After this ratio, the trend increased remarkably to 42 million in 1998. In the last two years it stayed stable at 42 million passengers.
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visited New York through three main
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airports
, for six years period between 1995-2000.

Overall
, during this period there was weird trend in the number of John F. Kennedy
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airport
. Other interesting point is that LaGuardia
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airport
was the most
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famous
at the
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In detail, the number of visitors at John F. Kennedy
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airport
began at 26
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million
in 1995, and then increased
remarkably
to 47
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million
in 1997. In 1999, this quantity collapsed to 32
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million
. At the last
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year
, there was
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growth to 44
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million
.
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, LaGuardia
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reach
the summit at 68
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travellers
.
However
, if we look at Newark
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airport
, it began at the lowest point of 16
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million
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travellers
in the
first
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year
. After this ratio, the trend increased
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in 1998. In the last two years it stayed stable at 42
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passengers.
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