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The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. xmDNa
The graph depicts about the average yearly expenditure on the mobile phones and the Housing mobile services from 2001 to 2010. This report is taken from the United States of Bureau of labor statistics, Over the years, cellphone prices has been increasing when compared to the hosing cell services. The cell phone services have surged rapidly when compared to the residental phone services. In the year 2006 both of the mobile and resdidental services have the same prices. After that residental phone servies has been dramtically reduced till 2010. However, spending on the mobile is increased highly from 2006 and has grwon exponetially. The price of the mobile has been around $200 in 2001 and when compared to the other which is around $700. This is a huge gap between the srevives. On the other hand, the mobile phone prices increased by 600 which is $800 in 2010. And yhe housing services decreased form $700 to arounfd $400. This shows that there is a increase in the price of mobiles when comapatred to the landlines over the years.
The graph depicts about the average yearly expenditure on the mobile
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phones
and the Housing mobile
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services
from 2001 to 2010. This report
is taken
from the United States of Bureau of labor statistics,

Over the years, cellphone
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prices
has been increasing when compared to the hosing cell
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services
. The cell
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phone
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services
have surged
rapidly
when compared to the
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residental
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phone
services.

In the year 2006 both of the mobile and
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resdidental
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services
have the same
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prices
.
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After
that
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residental
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phone
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servies
has been
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dramtically
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reduced
till 2010.
However
, spending on the mobile
is increased
highly
from 2006 and has
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grwon
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exponetially
.

The
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price
of the mobile has been around $200 in 2001 and when compared to the other which is around $700. This is a huge gap between the
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srevives
.
On the other hand
, the mobile
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phone
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prices
increased by 600 which is $800 in 2010. And
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yhe
housing
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services
decreased form $700 to
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arounfd
$400. This
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shows
that there is
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a
increase in the
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price
of mobiles when
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comapatred
to the landlines over the years.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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