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The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.

The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. BJanj
Given line charts illustrates the yearly vistits to Australia by international tourists from the year 1975 to 2005 while the statics of travellers from six different contries are illustrated by the table in both 1975 and 2005. The units meansured in millions of people. As can be seen, a staggering increase in the number of visits to Australia is noticeable. A large portion of this increase can be attributed to South Koreans and Japanese tourists as is evident in the table data. An upward moving trend is clearly visible in the line graph that shows an increase in visits to Australia by foreigners as the number rose from 8. 8 million in 1975 to 30. 2 million in 2005, almost trebling in value in the period spanning from 1975 to 2000. This spike in numbers can be largely attributed to Asian tourists, especially South Koreans and Japanese as their tourism rose a whopping 15 million collectively. This trend was not seen in the United States, China, or Britain as their tourists’ numbers visited Australia increased gradually around 1. 1, 0. 8 and 2. 9 respectively in 2005. Europeans tourism, however, also saw a rise in appetite towards Australia their tourism almost quadrupled from 1975 to 2005.
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vistits
to Australia by international
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tourists
from the year 1975 to 2005 while the statics of
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travellers
from six
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different
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contries
are illustrated
by the table in both 1975 and 2005. The units
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meansured
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millions
of
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people
.

As can be
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seen
, a staggering increase in the
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number
of visits to Australia is noticeable. A large portion of this increase can
be attributed
to South Koreans and Japanese
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tourists
as is evident in the table data.

An upward moving trend is
clearly
visible in the line graph that
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an increase in visits to Australia by foreigners as the
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number
rose from 8. 8
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million
in 1975 to 30. 2
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million
in 2005, almost trebling in value in the period spanning from 1975 to 2000.

This spike in
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numbers
can be
largely
attributed to Asian
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tourists
,
especially
South Koreans and Japanese as their tourism rose a whopping 15
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million
collectively
. This trend was not
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seen
in the United States, China, or Britain as their
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tourists’
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numbers
visited Australia increased
gradually
around 1. 1, 0. 8 and 2. 9
respectively
in 2005. Europeans tourism,
however
,
also
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saw
a rise in appetite towards Australia their tourism almost quadrupled from 1975 to 2005.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.

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