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The bar chart gives information about average number of gold,sliver and bronze medals winners at winter olympic games

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The bar chart gives information about average number of gold, sliver and bronze medals winners at winter olympic games by 5 countries (Germany, France, Belgium, UK and Italy). Overall, The highest number of Bronze and silver medals won by all of the countries, whereas the most of gold medals won by Germany, France, and Italy as compared to UK and Belgium. As it can be seen that Germany, France, Begium and italy was holding the heigest winning average of bronze and silver respectively. On the other hand, UK won the more silver madals than bronze. Italy won highest number of bronze and silver medals, while UK got the least number of medals. In gold medals, the heighest gold medals won by the Germany, France and Italy, While Belgium and UK won the lowest gold medals. Combinely Italy won the heighest medals in comparison to anyother country, While UK was standing with lowest number of medals.
The bar chart gives information about average
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of gold, sliver and bronze
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medals
winners at winter
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olympic games


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by
5 countries (Germany, France, Belgium, UK and Italy).

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, The highest
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number
of Bronze and
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silver
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medals
won by
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all of the
countries, whereas the
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most of gold
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won by Germany, France, and Italy as compared to

UK and Belgium.

As it can be
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that Germany, France,
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was holding the
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heigest
winning average of bronze and
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silver
respectively
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, UK won the more
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madals


than bronze. Italy won
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highest
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of bronze and
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silver
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medals
, while UK
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got
the least
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number
of medals.

In gold
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medals
, the
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heighest
gold
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medals
won by the Germany, France and Italy, While Belgium and UK won the lowest gold medals.

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Combinely
Italy won the
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heighest
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medals
in comparison
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anyother
country, While UK was standing with
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lowest
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medals
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