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Nowadays, more and more advertisement companies make people belive that their stuff are exclusive in some way. In my view it has negative development and in myessay I`m going to consider the reasons and drowbaks of this statement. Firstly, it not siecret that usually companies lay about that their products are new in order to take more money and it is not right at one point. For example: pharmaceutical companies which usually produce a huge amount of peals with same quality, composition and effect but with not same price. And it lead to that, people buy the medicine with best advertisement more. Secondly, in that days it becomes harder to surprise people. So they try to attract buyer by a new products. Usually, people belive and b it because of collorfull packeg whitch literally screaming to buy this special and innovated product The main reason of it issue it could be that in our modern market are appeared more and more advertisement companies. It means that competiton is growing. So they have to find a new ways to find more consumers. Conslusion, in my view it has a negative development which developed by some reasons and this problem should be solved.
Nowadays, more and more advertisement
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companies
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make
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people
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belive
that their stuff are exclusive in
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some
way. In my view it has
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negative
development and in
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myessay
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I`m
going to consider the reasons and
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drowbaks
of this statement.
Firstly
, it not
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siecret
that
usually
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companies
lay about that their products are new in order to take more money and it is not right at one point.
For example
: pharmaceutical
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companies
which
usually
produce a huge amount of peals with same quality, composition and effect
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but
with not same price. And it
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lead
to that,
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people
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buy
the medicine
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with best
advertisement more.
Secondly
, in that days it becomes harder to surprise
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people
.
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So
they try to attract buyer by a new
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products
.
Usually
,
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people
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belive
and b it
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because
of
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collorfull
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packeg
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whitch
literally
screaming to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
this special and innovated product The main reason of it issue it could be that in our modern market
are appeared
more and more advertisement
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companies
. It means that
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competiton
is growing.
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So
they
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have to
find a new
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ways
to find more consumers.
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Conslusion
, in my view it has a
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negative
development which developed by
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some
reasons and this problem should
be solved
.
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