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Is aging natural? In my opinion, age is just a number. Getting older every year is a natural process. The elderly are treated differently here in Hungary, and we should pay more attention to that. For example: to hand over your seat on the bus. I think helping the elderly should be respected. I visit my elderly grandparents several times a month. In the village where I live I help the elderly with shopping or if their taakai is hard I help to get to their house. People’s attention, I think, should be better drawn to the fact that aging is not a problem. A person can gain a lot of experience over the years, so older people can pass on many more experiences to young people.
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helping the
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experience over the years,
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IELTS academic international magazine article

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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