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The bar chart gives information about aged 65 and over population in five countries over 50 year period.

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The bar chart gives information about aged 65 and over population in five countries over 50 year period. In 1985, wales got more population compared others at around less than a fifth above. (15%)Moreover, UK and England was second higest countries who got 15% population scotland and Northern Ireland both were get equal population around one in ten above (10% above. )By 2035, wales and scotland get more aged 65 and over around a quarter and above. (25% and above)However England get loss population at 20%above. In addition to, UK and Northern ireland get equal citizened aged 65 and over at one fifth above. (20%above)Overall, the proportio are Predicted to increase in all UK countries. In 1985, 15percent of the UK Population was over 65, but by 2035, this wil account for 23 Percent of the total Population.
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more aged 65 and
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England
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about aged 65 and over population in five countries over 50 year period.

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