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The bar chart gives data on the percentage of females from different countries entering higher education after finishing school in 1970 and 2005.

The bar chart gives data on the percentage of females from different countries entering higher education after finishing school in 1970 and 2005. ORGdE

The bar chart gives data on the percentage of females from different countries entering higher education after finishing school in 1970 and 2005. The countries in the chart are the UK, the USA, Canada, Japan, and Germany. In general, there were more female students in 2005 than in 1970. Almost all countries experienced an increase in the percentage of women in higher education except Canada, which remained unchanged. As it is presented in the chart, the most significant rise was in Japan, where the percentage doubled from 20% to 40%. Whereas the slightest change can be seen in Germany, the number increased by approximately 5%. The USA and the UK also followed an increasing trend, both countries had increased by about 15% and 25%, respectively. From 1970 to 2005, the percentage of women going into higher education in Canada remained constant with 60%. It was the highest in both years and equaled the highest with the UK in 2005.

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 in the chart are the UK, the USA, Canada, Japan, and Germany.

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 of women in higher education except Canada, which remained unchanged.

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percentage
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countries
 had increased by about 15% and 25%, respectively
. From 1970 to 2005, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 of women going into higher education in Canada remained constant with 60%. It was the highest in both years and equaled the highest with the UK in 2005. 