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The graphs give information about the transport and usage of car usage in Edmonton

The graphs give information about the transport and usage of car usage in Edmonton gWKoa
The pie chart shows how people in the city of Edmonton use four types of transport, while the table provides data on five different reasons for driving. Overall, the city dwellers prefer cars to LRT (Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi; and people mostly use cars in order to travel to work. As the information suggests, 45% of the people in Edmonton city like to drive, while the figure regarding the LRT system stands at exactly one-tenth less. The remaining 20% is equally divided between using bus and taxi. This also means that the number of people driving more than doubles the combined total of bus and taxi users. And those using the LRT more than triple both the number of people choosing a bus and those travelling by taxi. Among reasons for using cars in the city, work travel accounts for more than a half. Taking children to schools and business activities represent 40% and 45%, respectively. And interestingly, the proportions of those using cars to go shopping and take part in leisure activities were similar, both stand at 15%.
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in order to travel to work. As the information suggests, 45% of the
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in Edmonton city like to drive, while the figure regarding the
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LRT
system stands at exactly one-tenth less. The remaining 20% is
equally
divided between using bus and
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taxi
. This
also
means that the number of
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people
driving more than doubles the combined total of bus and
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users. And those using the
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LRT
more than triple both the number of
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people
choosing a bus and those travelling by
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taxi
. Among reasons for using
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cars
in the city, work travel accounts for more than a half. Taking children to schools and business activities represent 40% and 45%,
respectively
. And
interestingly
, the proportions of those using
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cars
to go shopping and
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take part
in leisure activities were similar, both stand at 15%.
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