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The bar chart given below given below export figures in US dollars for various years for 2009 to 2014 while the palta give the share of different biogeographical zones in the world.

The bar chart given below given below export figures in US dollars for various years for 2009 to 2014 while the palta give the share of different biogeographical zones in the world. D2pr6
The bar graph illustrates the export figure (in million US Dollar) from 2009 to 2014 and while, the pie chart shows the proportion of zones in the world. Overall, it is clear that export in 2012 and 2014 of the highest and in the beginning to the lowest. However, in the pie chart Western europe was the highest and United states was the lowest in the proportion. In2009, the export was 200 million US dollar but according to the time it arise by 100 lakh US dollar every year. Moreover, it shows an upward trend from 2000 to 2012 but in 2013 exports has decreased from 500 to 400 US Dollars. ln addition to that, 2014 it's go again to 500. In pie chart, 5 zones were sharing the portion and the largest covers one third which was western europe. Following that, middle east was approximately one-fourth of the total. The other three was below 20% but with the minor difference with three prcent from one another.
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from 2009 to 2014 and while, the pie chart
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the proportion of zones in the world.
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in 2012 and 2014 of the highest and in the beginning to the lowest.
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every year.
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an upward trend from 2000 to 2012
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in 2013
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addition to that, 2014 it's go again to 500. In pie chart, 5 zones were sharing the portion and the largest covers one third which was
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western europe
. Following that,
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was approximately one-fourth of the total. The other three was below 20%
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IELTS academic The bar chart given below given below export figures in US dollars for various years for 2009 to 2014 while the palta give the share of different biogeographical zones in the world.

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