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Smartphone Ownership, 2000 to 2010

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A glance at the given graphs provide reveals on percentage of owned smartphones over a decade between 2000 and 2010. Overall, what stands out from the charts is that utilising cellular phone was popularized annually as well as among students. Hence this development registered for a significant escalation over the question period. Turning to the details in the initial year mobile phones could be found in 40% of world's population. Till 2004 this trend had an increase for almost 5% yearly and marked well over 50%. In the following years thanks to new technological phone advances the demand for them rised, interestingly, experienced a twofold growth for 10 % each year than before. At the end of the period 85% of individuals possessed. In terms of education levels' ownership, the amount of school children's usage went up by one third from high shool graduaters in 2000. Moreover in 2010 the pupils' utilization was 2 times lower than Batchelor one. Those charts maintained rising over the levels of education and Doctorate degree students marked far the most usage in both periods 75% and 90% respectively.
A glance at the
given
graphs provide reveals on percentage of
owned
smartphones
over
a decade between 2000 and 2010.

Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that
utilising
cellular phone
was popularized
annually
as well
as among students.
Hence
this development registered for a significant escalation
over
the question period.

Turning to the
details
in the initial year mobile phones could
be found
in 40% of world's population. Till 2004 this trend had an increase for almost 5% yearly and marked well
over
50%. In the following years thanks to new technological phone advances the demand for them
rised
,
interestingly
, experienced a twofold growth for 10 % each year than
before
. At the
end
of the period 85% of individuals possessed.

In terms of education levels' ownership, the amount of school children's usage went up by one third from high
shool
graduaters
in 2000.
Moreover
in 2010 the pupils' utilization was 2 times lower than
Batchelor
one. Those charts maintained rising
over
the levels of education and Doctorate degree students marked far the most usage in both periods 75% and 90%
respectively
.

IELTS academic Smartphone Ownership, 2000 to 2010

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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