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The diagram shows apple juice production.

The diagram shows apple juice production. 0MmQQ

The diagram explains the way in which apple juice is made by various steps. Overall, the complex process consists of eleven stages, beginning with collect the Apple from farm and ending up with bottle filling. First of all, harvested and good apples are collected to serve as a raw material for apple juice production. In the next stage, before washing and sorting apples, these best apple put on the receiving belt. After that, washed and shorted apples put ib grinder to make small pieces. Following this, these contents undergo concentration process, where water need to be added. Then, this mixture further sent for filtration. Furthermore this liquid is fillded in bottles after pasteurization at 80°c. In the final stage, this bottles are packed in boxes and deliver to supermarket by huge truck.

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