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The chart shows the sources of income and expenses for children's charity in usa in 2016

The chart shows the sources of income and expenses for children's charity in usa in 2016 WEDaD

The assigned pie charts reveal the information about the sources of annual revenue and expenses by the USA based children's charitable organisations in year 2016. Overall, it is lucid that donated food emerged as a leader in the income sources and most of the expenses were spend on program service in one particular year. At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that the biggest chunk was taken by donated food in revenue sources of USA charity foundation during 2016, whereas investment income, other income, government grants grabbed smallest slice, accounting for merely 0. 2% to 0. 4%; however, the contribution of community and program lay between the range of 2. 2% and 10. 4% during the given time span. Despite this, the huge amount of money was consumed by program services with 95. 4% in year 2016 as against others; , in spite of, the expenditure on fundraising and management was 1. 6% and2. 6%, respectively.

The assigned pie charts reveal the information about the sources of annual revenue and expenses by the USA based children's charitable Possible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.organizations
organisations
 in year 2016.

Overall
, it is lucid that donated food emerged as a leader in the income sources and most of the expenses were Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 on program service in one particular year.

At a fleeting glance, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the biggest chunk was taken
 by donated food in revenue sources of USA charity foundation during 2016, whereas investment income, other income, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 grants grabbed A determiner is probably missing here: "the smallest".the smallest
smallest
 slice, accounting for merely
 0. 2% to 0. 4%; however
, the contribution of community and program lay between the range of 2. 2% and 10. 4% during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time span.

Despite this, the huge amount of money was consumed
 by program services with 95. 4% in year 2016 as against others;Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma,
 ,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
, the expenditure on fundraising and management was 1. 6% and2. 6%, respectively
. 