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The bar chart depicts main exports of south land of in the years 2000, 2021, 2025.

The bar chart depicts main exports of south land of in the years 2000, 2021, 2025. MBkJe
Overall, the main exports are international tourism, Dairy Products, and Meat. International tourism and dairy exports have in 2021 and are expected to rise in 2025, but latter will fall. Meat products have decreased over the years and is expected to fall in 2025. International tourism has increased by about a pounds in 2021, from 8 to nearly 9 pounds. It’s expected to rise further by one pounds in 2025. Dairy products have shown significant growth, growing from seven ten pounds. Meat products fell marginally in 2021 from 6 to around 5. 5 pounds. Dairy products are expected to fall nearly by 500 pounds in 2025. Meat products are projected to decrease by another half a pounds, reaching 5 pounds worth of exports in 2025.
Overall
, the main exports are international tourism, Dairy
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Products
, and
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Meat
. International tourism and dairy exports have in 2021 and are
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expected
to rise in 2025,
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latter will fall.
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Meat
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products
have decreased over the years and is
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expected
to fall in 2025.

International tourism has increased by about a pounds in 2021, from 8 to
nearly
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9 pounds
. It’s
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expected
to rise
further
by one pounds in 2025. Dairy
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products
have shown significant growth, growing from seven ten pounds.
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Meat
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products
fell
marginally
in 2021 from 6 to around 5.
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5 pounds
.

Dairy
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products
are
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expected
to fall
nearly
by
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500 pounds
in 2025.
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Meat
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products
are projected
to decrease by another half
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a pounds
, reaching
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5 pounds
worth of exports in 2025.
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IELTS academic The bar chart depicts main exports of south land of in the years 2000, 2021, 2025.

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