Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009.

The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009. k5poe
The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009. Apartments were preferred by residents of London and Liverpool, whereas detached houses were preferred by residents of Manchester. Terraced residences, on the other hand, have the lowest occupancy rates of any city. As shown in the graph, approximately 60% of Liverpool residents, nearly three times as many as Manchester people, have chosen to live in apartments. In Liverpool and Manchester, however, the results for detached and semi-detached dwellings revealed the opposite trend, with roughly 16 percent and well over 35 percent of selections indicated in each perspective. On the other hand, terraced houses were preferred by onlookers. More over a third of residents in London picked semi-detached residences. Nearly 30 percent and 25 percent of people, respectively, chose apartments and detached houses. Terraced dwellings, on the other hand, were preferred by a smaller percentage of people, with only about 20% opting for them
The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009.

Apartments were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preferred
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
residents
of London and Liverpool, whereas detached
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preferred
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
residents
of Manchester. Terraced residences,
on the other hand
, have the lowest occupancy rates of any city.

As shown in the graph, approximately 60% of Liverpool
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
residents
,
nearly
three times as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
as Manchester
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, have chosen to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in apartments. In Liverpool and Manchester,
however
, the results for detached and semi-detached dwellings revealed the opposite trend, with roughly 16
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
and well over 35
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
of selections indicated in each perspective.
On the other hand
, terraced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preferred
by onlookers.

More over a third of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
residents
in London picked semi-detached residences.
Nearly
30
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
and 25
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
percent
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
,
respectively
, chose apartments and detached
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
. Terraced dwellings,
on the other hand
, were
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
preferred
by a smaller percentage of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
about 20% opting for
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
them
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The bar chart depicted data from residents' housing preferences in Liverpool, London, and Manchester in 2009.