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The bar chart demonstrated statistics from Liverpool, London, and Manchester residents' housing choices in 2009.

The bar chart demonstrated statistics from Liverpool, London, and Manchester residents' housing choices in 2009. dqBMd
The bar chart demonstrated statistics from Liverpool, London, and Manchester residents' housing choices in 2009. Overall, residents of London and Liverpool liked apartments the most, whereas residents of Manchester chose detached houses. Terraced houses, on the other hand, have the lowest figures in all cities. As can be seen from the chart, almost 60% of Liverpool residents have opted to live in apartments, nearly three times as many as Manchester residents. The results for detached and semi-detached houses, on the other hand, showed the reverse trend, with about 16% and well over 35% of choices indicated in each view in Liverpool and Manchester. Terraced residences, on the other hand, were chosen by only around 10% of residents in both cities. In London, semi-detached houses were chosen by more than a third of residents. Apartments and detached houses were chosen by almost 30% and 25% of residents, respectively. Terraced houses, on the other hand, had a smaller percentage of residents, less than 20% choosing them.
The bar chart demonstrated statistics from Liverpool, London, and Manchester residents' housing choices in 2009.

Overall
,
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residents
of London and Liverpool liked apartments the most, whereas
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residents
of Manchester chose detached
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houses
. Terraced
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houses
, on the
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other
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hand
, have the lowest figures in all cities.

As can be
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seen
from the chart, almost 60% of Liverpool
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residents
have opted to
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live
in apartments,
nearly
three times as
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many
as Manchester
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residents
. The results for detached and semi-detached
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houses
, on the
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other
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hand
,
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showed
the reverse trend, with about 16% and well over 35% of choices indicated in each view in Liverpool and Manchester. Terraced residences, on the
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other
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hand
,
were chosen
by
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only
around 10% of
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residents
in both cities.

In London, semi-detached
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houses
were chosen
by more than a third of
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residents
. Apartments and detached
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houses
were chosen
by almost 30% and 25% of
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residents
,
respectively
. Terraced
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houses
, on the
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other
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hand
, had a smaller percentage of
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residents
, less than 20% choosing them.
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrated statistics from Liverpool, London, and Manchester residents' housing choices in 2009.

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