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The bar chart depicts data on UK residents' housing choices in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These were found in a British survey conducted in 2009.

The bar chart depicts data on UK residents' housing choices in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These were found in a British survey conducted in 2009. 5ApnD
The bar chart depicts data on UK residents' housing choices in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These were found in a British survey conducted in 2009. Overall, residents of London and Liverpool favored apartments the most, whereas residents of Manchester favoured detached houses. Terraced houses have the lowest figures in all cities. As can be seen from the graph, approximately 60% of Liverpool residents have chosen to live in apartments, nearly three times as many as Manchester residents. The numbers for detached and semi-detached houses, on the other hand, showed the reverse trend, with roughly 16 percent and well over 35 percent of choices expressed in each view in Liverpool and Manchester, respectively. Terraced houses were chosen by only about 10% of residents in both cities. Detached residences were favoured by roughly 35% of persons in London. Apartments and semi-detached houses came in second and third, with over 35 percent for the former and nearly 30 percent for the latter. Finally, just roughly 12% of London residents preferred terraced houses.
The bar chart depicts data on UK residents' housing choices in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These
were found
in a British survey conducted in 2009.

Overall
,
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residents
of London and Liverpool favored apartments the most, whereas
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residents
of Manchester
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favoured
detached
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houses
. Terraced
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houses
have the lowest figures in all cities.

As can be
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seen
from the graph, approximately 60% of Liverpool
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residents
have chosen to
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live
in apartments,
nearly
three times as
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many
as Manchester
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residents
. The numbers for detached and semi-detached
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houses
,
on the other hand
,
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showed
the reverse trend, with roughly 16
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percent
and well over 35
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percent
of choices expressed in each view in Liverpool and Manchester,
respectively
. Terraced
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houses
were chosen
by
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only
about 10% of
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residents
in both cities.

Detached residences were
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favoured
by roughly 35% of persons in London. Apartments and semi-detached
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houses
came in second and third, with over 35
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percent
for the former and
nearly
30
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percent
for the latter.
Finally
,
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just
roughly 12% of London
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preferred terraced
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houses
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart depicts data on UK residents' housing choices in Liverpool, London, and Manchester. These were found in a British survey conducted in 2009.

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