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The bar chart illustrates the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit four specific European cities in the year 2018.

The bar chart illustrates the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit four specific European cities in the year 2018. NVEJd
The bar chart illustrates the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit four specific European cities in the year 2018. It is estimated that Marid will be the most attractive location among others, whereas Liverpool will welcome the lowest number of tourists in the year 2018. Overall, the USA is expected to send more tourists than either of the other two countries, the opposite is true for Mexico. Also, each country has a strong preference with regard to destination. According to the chart, there will be a hundred thousand of Americans paying a visit to Marid, compared to 80 and 70 thousands of Canadian and Mexican people respectively. In contrast, the total number of tourists projected to Liverpool is significantly lower in 2008. Specifically, Liverpool will receive approximately 50 thousand people from the US, which is more than double the figure for Canada and Mexico's estimations are far lower, roughly 18, 000 people expected to come. Looking at the chart in more detail, 80 thousands of American tourists are expected to visit Roma in 2018, which is followed by nearly 50 thousand Canadians. On the contrary, Mexico had the lowest on data, with only one fourth of the American’s. However, the data on visitors from all three nations going on a holiday in Paris are forecasted relatively similar, with just over 60 thousand during the same year.
The bar chart illustrates the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit four specific European cities in the year 2018.

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will be the most attractive location among others, whereas Liverpool will welcome the lowest number of
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in the year 2018.
Overall
, the USA is
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than either of the other two countries, the opposite is true for Mexico.
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, each country has a strong preference with regard to destination.

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, compared to 80 and
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70 thousands of
Canadian and Mexican
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respectively
.
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, the total number of
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projected to Liverpool is
significantly
lower in 2008.
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, Liverpool will receive approximately 50 thousand
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from the US, which is more than double the figure for Canada and Mexico's estimations are far lower, roughly 18, 000
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Looking at the chart in more detail,
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80 thousands of
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tourists
are
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expected
to visit Roma in 2018, which
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only
one fourth of the American’s.
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, the data on visitors from all three nations going on a holiday in Paris
are forecasted
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over 60 thousand during the same year.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the number of predicted travelers from the US, Canada and Mexico to visit four specific European cities in the year 2018.

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