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The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of people accessing news via different media in one country in four main categories: Televison, Newspaper, Radio and Internet in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of people accessing news via different media in one country in four main categories: Televison, Newspaper, Radio and Internet in 2013, 2015 and 2017. Elomr
The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of people accessing news via different media in one country in four main categories: Televison, Newspaper, Radio and Internet in 2013, 2015 and 2017. The measurements are given as percentages for each type. It can be easily seen from the graph that the number of people accessing news via television accounts for the largest proportion in each year, from more than 70% to approximately 80%. There was an enormous increase in the number of Internet users, by 31%, 40% and 69% respectively. The last two groups are Newspaper and Radio. The users of Radio was quite stable, with just over 30 percent in 2013, 2015, and 2017. In contrast, parameter of the Newspaper decreased substantially over the years, from more than 40% down to 20%.
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over 30 percent in 2013, 2015, and 2017.
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates the distribution of people accessing news via different media in one country in four main categories: Televison, Newspaper, Radio and Internet in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

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