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The bar chart demonstrates the amount of coffee which was manufactured in 4 separate nations over the period from 1990 to 201

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The bar chart demonstrates the amount of coffee which was manufactured in 4 separate nations over the period from 1990 to 2010. A glance at the chart reveals that coffee production in almost all countries increased, except for Indonesia. The most dramatic growth was seen in Brazil. In 1990, the total of coffee produced in Brazil had the highest figure, at approximately 0. 6 million tonnes, followed by 0. 6 million tonnes in Indonesia. The figures for Colombia and Viet Nam were lower, at under 0. 2 million tonnes. After a period of ten years, in comparison with coffee manufacturing in Brazil, which witnessed a sharp rise to nearly 1. 5 million tonnes, the share of coffee production in Colombia declined quickly to 0. 4 million tonnes. The figure for Indonesia and VietNam experienced a moderate rise to about 0. 3 and 0. 2 million tonnes. Finally, in 2010, the amount of coffee production in Brazil soared substantially once again to above 1. 9 million tonnes and peaked at the highest figure while the figure for Colombia declined gradually to under 0. 4 million tonnes. The quantity of Coffee production in Indonesia and VietNam ascended gradually to 0. 4 and 0. 3 million tones respectively.
The bar chart demonstrates the amount of
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which
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in 4 separate nations over the period from 1990 to 2010.

A glance at the chart reveals that
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coffee
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production
in almost all countries increased,
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except for
Indonesia. The most dramatic growth was
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seen
in Brazil.

In 1990, the total of
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produced in Brazil had the highest
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figure
, at approximately 0. 6
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million
tonnes, followed by 0. 6
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million
tonnes in Indonesia. The
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figures
for Colombia and
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Viet
Nam
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lower, at under 0. 2
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million
tonnes. After a period of ten years,
in comparison
with
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manufacturing in Brazil, which witnessed a sharp rise to
nearly
1. 5
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million
tonnes, the share of
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coffee
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production
in Colombia declined
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VietNam
experienced a moderate rise to about 0. 3 and 0. 2
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million
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Finally
, in 2010, the amount of
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coffee
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production
in Brazil soared
substantially
once again to above 1. 9
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million
tonnes and peaked at the highest
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figure
while the
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for Colombia declined
gradually
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production
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ascended
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates the amount of coffee which was manufactured in 4 separate nations over the period from 1990 to 201

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