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The comparison of production and consumption of Rice in X country and the comparison of rice and other crops consumed inX country.

The comparison of production and consumption of Rice in X country and the comparison of rice and other crops consumed inX country. k5NRN
The line graph illustrates the production and the consumption of Rice. In X country interms of million tons, whereas the bar diagram depicts the proportion of consumption of Rice and Other food crops, since 1990 with predictions until 2040. Overall, it is apparent from the first chart that the production and the consumption of Rice will experience an upward trend by the end of the year, however it is evident from the second chart that the ratio of consumption of Rice and Other food crops are predicted to have same percentage until the end of the given period. Regarding the line graph, 25 million tons of Rice were produced in the first year which will be increasing slightly to roughly 75 million tons in 2040. On the other hand, just under 59 million tons of Rice had eaten by the pupils of X country in 1990 and it remained relatively unchanged till 2020. However, it is forecasted to grew gradually to reach more than 50 million tons in 2040. Turning to the bar diagram, at first glance, other food crops were more popular in X country with a little more than 50% in 1990 which inclined considerably from two quarters in 2000 to less than 25 % in 2020 but the consumption anticipated to rise slightly to 59% in 2040. Similarly, the consumption of Rice stood at less than 50% in 1990. Over the following next 30 years, it climbed to reach nearly 100%. In contrast, it will be declined significantly to 50% by 2040.
The line graph illustrates the production and the
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. In X country
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interms
of
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million
tons, whereas the bar diagram depicts the proportion of
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Rice
and
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Other
food crops, since 1990 with predictions until 2040.

Overall
, it is apparent from the
first
chart that the production and the
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consumption
of
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Rice
will experience an upward trend by the
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end
of the year,
however
it is evident from the second chart that the ratio of
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consumption
of
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Rice
and
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Other
food crops
are predicted
to have same percentage until the
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end
of the
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given
period.

Regarding the line graph, 25
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million
tons of
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Rice
were produced
in the
first
year which will be increasing
slightly
to roughly 75
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million
tons in 2040. On the
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other
hand,
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just
under 59
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million
tons of
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Rice
had eaten by the pupils of X country in 1990 and it remained
relatively
unchanged till 2020.
However
, it
is forecasted
to grew
gradually
to reach more than 50
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million
tons in 2040.

Turning to the bar diagram, at
first
glance,
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other
food crops were more popular in X country with a
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little
more than 50% in 1990 which inclined
considerably
from two quarters in 2000 to less than 25 % in 2020
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but
the
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consumption
anticipated to rise
slightly
to 59% in 2040.
Similarly
, the
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consumption
of
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Rice
stood at less than 50% in 1990. Over the following
next
30 years, it climbed to reach
nearly
100%.
In contrast
, it will
be declined
significantly
to 50% by 2040.
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