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The following maps illustrate different changes that occurred in an island to provide facilities for tourists.

The following maps illustrate different changes that occurred in an island to provide facilities for tourists. As can be clearly observed from the maps, the island witnesses various modifications, the most important of which takes place in the central region of the island where a remarkable number of residential tents are constructed. On the southern part of the island, a pier is developed to become a place that bouts can land. Despite other parts of the island, it seems that there are not significant improvements on the eastern section of the island. Moreover, several accommodations along side a number of footpaths between them are built in the western side of the island near the beach. In addition, between two residential sectors of the island, a restaurant and a reception center are constructed which a vehicle track road connects them to pier and also to each other. It is clear from the maps that beside the beach a swimming area is developed in where tourists have the opportunity to enjoy the sea and lay in the sun’s golden light.
The following maps illustrate
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island
to provide facilities for tourists.

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observed from the maps, the
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island
witnesses various modifications, the most
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important
of which takes place in the central region of the
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island
where a remarkable number of residential tents
are constructed
. On the southern part of the
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island
, a pier
is developed
to become a place that bouts can land. Despite other parts of the
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island
, it seems that there are not significant improvements on the eastern section of the island.

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, several accommodations
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a number of footpaths between them
are built
in the western side of the
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island
near the beach.
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, between two residential sectors of the
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island
, a restaurant and a reception center
are constructed
which a vehicle
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track
road connects them to pier and
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to each other.

It is
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clear
from the maps that beside the beach a swimming area
is developed
in where tourists have the opportunity to enjoy the sea and lay in the sun’s golden light.
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IELTS academic The following maps illustrate different changes that occurred in an island to provide facilities for tourists.

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