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The bar chart compares the rates of the uneducated population divided by females and males in six different areas in 2000.

The bar chart compares the rates of the uneducated population divided by females and males in six different areas in 2000. 0Epn5
The bar chart compares the rates of the uneducated population divided by females and males in six different areas in 2000. Overall, the ratio of unlettered citizens was higher in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab countries and South Asia compared to developed countries. Nevertheless, illiteracy among women was higher than men in all regions. To begin with, the lowest rates were in Developed countries, at 1%. The Caribbean had more uneducated residents among females and males, nearly 11%. On the contrary, East Asia/Oceania had only 9% by women and almost double by men, at 20%. The other three regions had the highest number of illiterate citizens. The percentage of men constituted about 30% in all areas, whereas the quantity among females rose gradually. In Africa and Arab land there were around and just over a half of unlettered women respectively.
The bar chart compares the rates of the uneducated population divided by females and males in six
different
areas in 2000.
Overall
, the ratio of unlettered citizens was higher in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab countries and South Asia compared to
developed countries
.
Nevertheless
, illiteracy among women was higher than
men
in all regions.

To
begin
with, the lowest rates were in
Developed countries
, at 1%. The Caribbean had more uneducated residents among females and males,
nearly
11%.
On the contrary
, East Asia/Oceania had
only
9% by women and almost double by
men
, at 20%. The other three regions had the highest number of illiterate citizens. The percentage of
men
constituted about 30% in all areas, whereas the quantity among females rose
gradually
. In Africa and Arab land there were around and
just
over a half of unlettered women
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares the rates of the uneducated population divided by females and males in six different areas in 2000.

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