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The bar chart compares about the proportion of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

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The bar chart compares about the proportion of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Overall, it can be seen that two areas are Latin America and North America have the highest of the percentages of the population living. Also, Africa and Asia have the lowest of the population living of the percentages. In 1950, the figure of the population living stood at 15% and 18% in two areas which is Africa and Asia respectively. This number then increased steadily to reach approximately 64% in this year. After some fluctuation, in 2007 witnessed a dramatic rise in the proportion of population living. In contrast, the most significant change is Oceania sharp fall in the population living in 2007.
The bar chart compares about the proportion of the
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in urban areas in
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different
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seen
that two areas are Latin America and North America have the highest of the percentages of the
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population
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living
.
Also
, Africa and Asia have the lowest of the
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population
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living
of the percentages.

In 1950, the figure of the
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population
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living
stood at 15% and 18% in two areas which is Africa and Asia
respectively
. This number then increased
steadily
to reach approximately 64% in this year.

After
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some
fluctuation, in 2007 witnessed a dramatic rise in the proportion of
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population
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living
.
In contrast
, the most significant
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change
is Oceania sharp fall in the
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population
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living
in 2007.

IELTS academic The bar chart compares about the proportion of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world.

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