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The bar chart compare the recycling rates among different waste material in a city in 1992 and 2002

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The information that what proportion of material was reused between 1992 and 2002 has been rendered by bar chart From an overall analysis, it is readily apparent that all given waste things were mostly recycled in last years as compared to other years interms of plastic, the ratio of recycling was accounted to be 10% in 1992, it proliferated by 5% after five years and remained stable in 2002. The percentage of glass which was recycled in 1992 and 1997 was 15% and 28% respectively. and reached at 45% in 2002. Discrepancy of 8% was witnessed in the ratio of recycled cans in 1992 and 1997 for former 8% and for latter 16%, the proprtion of cans was maximum ni last year. The percentage of reused papers was two fold in 1997, the figure of initial year with 22%
The information that what proportion of material
was reused
between 1992 and 2002 has
been rendered
by bar chart From an
overall
analysis, it is
readily
apparent that all
given
waste things were
mostly
recycled in last years as compared to other years
interms
of plastic, the ratio of recycling
was accounted
to be 10% in 1992, it proliferated by 5% after five years and remained stable in 2002. The percentage of glass which
was recycled
in 1992 and 1997 was 15% and 28%
respectively
.
and
reached at 45% in 2002.

Discrepancy of 8%
was witnessed
in the ratio of recycled cans in 1992 and 1997 for former 8% and for latter 16%, the
proprtion
of cans was maximum
ni
last
year
. The percentage of reused papers was
two fold
in 1997, the figure of initial
year
with 22%
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IELTS academic The bar chart compare the recycling rates among different waste material in a city in 1992 and 2002

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