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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates compares the production and consumption of electricity in the top ten nations in 2014. Overall, it is clear that the electricity was highest consumed and produced in China and the US. Also, the consumption was always less than the production in every country except Germany. To begin with, China was the major producer of electricity, which is 5398 billion kWh. Consumed electricity in China was 5322 billion kWh, which is more than any other nation. Followed by the US, where the consumed electricity was 4099 billion kWh and the produced electricity 3866 billion kWh. In Russia, Japan, and India, electricity production was 1057, 936. 2, and 871 respectively. Consumption and Production of electricity in Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea were all less than 650 billion kWh. In Germany, electricity produced was 582. 5 billion kWh which is 56 billion kWh more than consumption. Also, the energy produced was lowest in Korea only 449. 5 kWh.
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in the top ten nations in 2014.

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in every country except Germany.

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in China was 5322
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was 4099
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3866
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was 1057, 936. 2, and 871
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in Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea were all less than 650
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was lowest in Korea
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449. 5 kWh.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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