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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. GAnL
The diagram depicts the information about how coffee is produced and prepared to sell in supermarkets and shops. The coffee is produced and prepared for consumption by undergoing eleven diferent steps starting from picking of coffee beans to packing in jars. The crucial step in production of coffee is roasting of beans, as taste of coffee depends upon the quality of roasted beans. Firstly, the coffee beans are picked by farmers and the beans are allowed to dry, after the moisture content of beans decrease they are roasted. The roasted beans are swiftly cooled and grinded. The grinded beans form a powder which is mixed with water and strained to remove impurities. The mixture obtained from previous step is cooled untill it is freezed. Then the frozen liquid is trasferred for another round of grinding. Finally, the grinded mixture is sent into a vaccum chamber to evaporate its water content. The clean roasted mixture is now packed into jars and transported to supermarkets and shops for consumption.
The diagram depicts the information about how
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coffee
is produced
and prepared to sell in supermarkets and shops.

The
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coffee
is produced
and prepared for consumption by undergoing eleven
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diferent
steps starting from picking of
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coffee
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beans
to packing in jars.
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The
crucial step in production of
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coffee
is roasting of
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beans
, as taste of
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coffee
depends upon the quality of roasted beans.

Firstly
, the
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coffee
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beans
are picked
by farmers and the
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beans
are
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allowed
to dry, after the moisture content of
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beans
decrease they
are roasted
. The roasted
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beans
are
swiftly
cooled and
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grinded
. The
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grinded
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beans
form a powder which
is mixed
with water and strained to remove impurities.

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The
mixture obtained from previous step
is cooled
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untill
it is
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freezed
. Then the frozen liquid is
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trasferred
for another round of grinding.
Finally
, the
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grinded
mixture is
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sent
into a
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vaccum
chamber to evaporate its water content. The clean roasted mixture is
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now
packed into jars and transported to supermarkets and shops for consumption.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

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6.0
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