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The pie charts and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during yhr 1990s and 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods

The pie charts and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during yhr 1990s and 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods 0rJl
The pie charts compare the survey of 25 years aged accommodation in London and the table show the availability of various kinds of housing in London in 1990 and 2010. As for the occupied accommodation types of 25-year-old Londoners, the rate of house-sharing and flat-sharing in the 2010s were higher than the one in the 1990s. Young residents have tended to move out of their parents' houses and together with other people rent and share accommodation but chose less to live alone. It is clear from the charts show that in the 1990s, only about 50% of those surveyed lived in shared houses or flats, after which this number increased significantly to around 75% in the 2010s. In contrast, there was a drop in the number of people living alone in the alone house and flat from about 25% to nearly 5% from 1990 to 2010. Besides, living with parents has become less common. There was a reduction in the number of 25-year-olds living with parents from approximately a third to under a quarter in this period. On the other hand, the reduction in the availability of 1-2 bedroom houses and flats have altered this figure. In the 1990s, there were 34000 1-2 bedroom houses, 32000 1-2 bedroom flats, and 3900 3-4 bedroom flats available. This figure decreased to 12000, 10000 and 32000 respectively in 2010. We can see the opposite trend in 3-4 bedroom houses. There was a gradual increase to 48. 500. The reason for this can be the trend to live in smaller accommodations instead of the larger ones.
The pie charts compare the survey of 25 years aged
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accommodation
in London and the table
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show
the availability of various kinds of housing in London in 1990 and 2010.

As for the occupied
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accommodation
types of 25-year-
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Londoners, the rate of
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house
-sharing and flat-sharing in the 2010s were higher than the one in the 1990s. Young residents have tended to
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move
out of their parents'
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houses
and together with other
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people
rent and share
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accommodation
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but
chose less to
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live
alone.

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clear
from the charts
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show
that in the 1990s,
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only
about 50% of those surveyed
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lived
in shared
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houses
or
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flats
, after which this number increased
significantly
to around 75% in the 2010s.
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, there was a drop in the number of
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people
living alone in the alone
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house
and
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flat
from about 25% to
nearly
5% from 1990 to 2010.
Besides
, living with parents has become less common. There was a reduction in the number of 25-year-olds living with parents from approximately a third to under a quarter in this period.

On the other hand
, the reduction in the availability of 1-2
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bedroom
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houses
and
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flats
have altered this figure. In the 1990s, there were 34000 1-2
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bedroom
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houses
, 32000 1-2
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bedroom
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flats
, and 3900 3-4
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bedroom
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flats
available. This figure decreased to 12000, 10000 and 32000
respectively
in 2010. We can
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see
the opposite trend in 3-4
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bedroom
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. There was a gradual increase to 48. 500. The reason for this can be the trend to
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live
in smaller accommodations
instead
of the larger ones.

IELTS academic The pie charts and the table show the types of living accommodation occupied by 25-year-olds in London during yhr 1990s and 2010s and the availability of different types of accommodation in London during the same two periods

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