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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. 10DM
The given chart illustrates the high figure production and comsumption of electricity in different countries in 2014. In general, this bar chart can be delivered these ten countries into two groups which had significant difference of electrical production and comsumption. The first group consists of China and United States at a remarkably higher level than remaining countries in the second group. The first obvious feature of this chart is that in 2014, China experienced the highest numbers of production and consumption electricity with 5, 398 and 5, 322 billions kWh, correspondently. Sequently, these numbers of United States were 4, 099 and 3, 866 billions kWh which were four times higher than Russia and even nine times more than Korea. In contrast, the figures of Russia, Japan and India which had moderate numbers with over 870 billions for each and reduced by 60 from Russia to India. Meanwhile, the group including Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea was witnessed slightly different numbers, rough 550 billions for production and almost 450 billions for consumption. Another prominent feature can be seen that in 2014, most countries producted electricity more than they consumed, except Russia and Germany, in which Russia had a balance at around 1050 billions and the consumption of Germany was more a little than the production.
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comsumption
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in 2014.

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these ten
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countries
into two groups which had significant difference of electrical
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comsumption
. The
first
group consists of China and United States at a
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in the second group.

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first
obvious feature of this chart is that in 2014, China experienced the highest
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numbers
of
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production
and consumption electricity with 5, 398 and 5, 322
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kWh,
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correspondently
.
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Sequently
, these
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were 4, 099 and 3, 866
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kWh which were four times higher than Russia and even nine times more than Korea.
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, the figures of Russia, Japan and India which had moderate
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with over 870
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billions
for each and
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reduced
by 60 from Russia to India. Meanwhile, the group including Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea
was witnessed
slightly
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, rough 550
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for
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and almost 450
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for consumption.

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that in 2014, most
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producted
electricity more than they consumed, except Russia and Germany, in which Russia had a balance at around 1050
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and the consumption of Germany was more a
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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