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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. aL0Y
The line chart illustrates the percentage of the population of 65 years old and above in three countries( USA, Sweden and japan) in the year from 1940 to 2040. Data is Calibrated in percentages. Overall, Japan initially start with 5% with is very low and slowly increased to above 25% of mature people in 2040 takes first place. USA in 1940 the population of old people having top rate with under 10 % and later its raise to above 20 % of people which is very low at 2040. First(ly), The population of 65 years and over people in japan had very low rate with 5% and start declines for 10 years became under 5% and that it slightly increased the growth of old people rate to 10% in 2020 and rapidly go to above 40% in 2040. Secondly, In Sweden takes more than 20 % in 1940 with some fluctuations raise to 25% in 2040. Finally, In USA senior citizens rate was very has in 1940 with around 10%. And later on its increased to 15% in 1980 after with some fluctuations it rose to above 20% in 2040
The line chart illustrates the percentage of the population of 65 years
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USA, Sweden and japan) in the
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25% of mature
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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