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The given chart illustrates the getting driving license’s process in America.

The given chart illustrates the getting driving license’s process in America. O0qj
The given chart illustrates the getting driving license’s process in America. Overall there are seven stages to pass the driving exams while several processes are implemented to retake type of exams in case drivers are failed in some stages. To begin, drivers has to emerge in driving license center on time to full in the application forms. After that, a test was set to test the eyesight’s level of participants to make sure they are satisfied the expectations of the center. If they are not qualified, there is no chance for them to have a license while the people who passed this test would pay fees to participate in the first exam which is written exam. There are two cases which are drivers pass this type of exam or not. In the first case, after finishing the written exam, drivers would do the road exam and this is final stage to get the driving licences. However, some people who might fail in driving test have to pay money to retake the written exam and start these processes again. In the second case, participants have not to pay fees compared to the stage which is after they failed the road exam but immediately retake the written exam. They have two time to conquer this test. If drivers fail, they has to pay money to take one more time while people who passed go straight ahead to road exam. All of this process is smooth circulation and repetition to ensure the participants will get the driving license in case they tried and qualified all demands.
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chart illustrates the getting
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license’s
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process
in America.

Overall
there are seven stages to pass the
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driving
exams while several
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processes
are implemented
to retake type of exams in case
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drivers
are failed
in
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some
stages.

To
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begin
,
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drivers
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has to
emerge in
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driving
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license
center on time to full in the application forms. After that, a
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test
was set
to
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test
the eyesight’s level of participants to
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make
sure they
are satisfied
the expectations of the center. If they are not qualified, there is no chance for them to have a
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license
while the
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people
who passed this
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test
would
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pay
fees to participate in the
first
exam which is
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written
exam.

There are two cases which are
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drivers
pass this type of exam or not. In the
first
case, after finishing the
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written
exam,
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drivers
would do the road exam and this is final stage to
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get
the
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driving
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licences
.
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,
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some
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people
who might fail in
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driving
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test
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have to
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pay
money to retake the
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written
exam and
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start
these
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processes
again. In the second case, participants have not to
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pay
fees compared to the stage which is after they failed the road exam
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but
immediately retake the
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written
exam. They have
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two time
to conquer this
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test
. If
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drivers
fail, they
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has
to
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pay
money to take one more time while
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people
who passed go straight ahead to road exam.

All of this
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process
is smooth circulation and repetition to ensure the participants will
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get
the
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driving
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license
in case they tried and qualified all demands.

IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the getting driving license’s process in America.

Academic
  American English
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263 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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