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The bar chart below shows the sector contribution to India's GDP from 1980 and 2020

The bar chart below shows the sector contribution to India's GDP from 1980 and 2020 YdQJK
The bar graph illustrate the information about three decentralised sector which gave contribution to India Gross Domestic Product in the time period between 1980 and 2020. The data has been calibrated in a percentage. At a fleeting glance, the striking feature of bar chart is that agriculture give the highest contribution to India's GDP in the 1980 and that was almost 40% where as industry give 10% contribution which was in plant 5% in 1990 and remain constant in the latter given three years. Scrutinizing further in the year of 1990 there was 30% agriculture Rose India GDP whilst the person term of agriculture declined asali and raised of 15% in 2020 in addition in 1980 the service contribute are most one 10% which was increased up to 10% more in 2010 person in 2020. Overall, it is quite evident that industry and service experience mushrooming trend to give contribution to India's GDP except agriculture show declining Trend
The bar graph illustrate the information about three
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which gave
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contribution
to India Gross Domestic Product in the time period between 1980 and 2020. The data has
been calibrated
in a percentage. At a fleeting glance, the striking feature of bar chart is that
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agriculture
give the highest
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contribution
to India's GDP in the 1980 and that was almost 40%
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industry give 10%
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contribution
which was in plant 5% in 1990 and remain constant in the latter
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three years. Scrutinizing
further
in the year of 1990 there was 30%
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agriculture
Rose India GDP whilst the person term of
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agriculture
declined
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asali
and raised of 15% in 2020
in addition
in 1980 the service contribute are most one 10% which
was increased
up to 10% more in 2010 person in 2020.
Overall
, it is quite evident that industry and service experience mushrooming trend to give
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contribution
to India's GDP except
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agriculture
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declining Trend
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the sector contribution to India's GDP from 1980 and 2020

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