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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age qroups who did regular pgysical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in different ages in 2010, who did physical exercise regularly. To begin with, the most striking characteristic is that in most age groups more women did physical activities that men. The only exception is in age group 15 to 24, in which more that 50% of males did regular exercise and less that half of the females did. More specifically, energetic men between 25 and 34 years old hardly surpassed 40%, whereas the corresponding women reached almost 50%. Older men, up to 44, were even less interested in regular exercise than the previous group, but more than 52% of females in the same age group were. Women from 45 to 54 years old were the most active, since 53. 3% of them were involved in physical activities in regular basis. Men in the same group were more active than men in the previous group and the older men were even more active than the former ones. In particularly, active men from 55 to 64 surpassed 45% of the population and active men over 56 soared to 46. 7%. On the other hand, active women from 55 to 64 dropped to 53 percent and sporty women older than 65 years old exceed men only for 0. 04%.
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15 to 24, in which more that 50% of males did regular exercise and less that half of the females did.

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between 25 and 34 years
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hardly surpassed 40%, whereas the corresponding
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reached almost 50%. Older
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, up to 44, were even less interested in regular exercise than the previous
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from 45 to 54 years
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from 55 to 64 surpassed 45% of the population and
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over 56 soared to 46. 7%.
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from 55 to 64 dropped to 53 percent and sporty
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older than 65 years
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age qroups who did regular pgysical activity in 2010.

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