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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 kYRDO
The rendered chart depicts the information about the males and females of Australia who did physical activity regularly with distinct age groups in the year 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Having a quick glance, the ratio of Australian men who were 15 to 24 years old and did regular physical activity was roughly 52. 8%, wheras only 47. 7% females took part in physical activity regularly. Interestingly, Australian men and women who did physical activity was 48. 9% and 42. 2% in 25 to 35 age group respectively. In 35 to 44 age group, the percentile of those females was registered as 52. 5% who did physical activity, while males percentage was 6. 7% less than their counterpart. Moving ahead, it is surprised to note that 43. 1% male and 53. 3% females of 45 to 54 age group participated in physical activity regularly. Just above a half ratio of women preferred to participate in physical activity, whilst men had only 45. 1% percentage in 55 to 64 age group. Therewas accounted a minimal difference for both participants in doing physical activity which was 46. 7% of Australian men and 47. 1% of females in 65 and over age group. Overall, it is crystal clear that the percentage of whole Australian females age group was witnessed more than male participants in doing physical activity except 15 to 24 age group.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

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