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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. BJm15
The line graph demonstrates energy usage in the USA since 1980 It is including forecasts by 2030. Datas comes from a 2008 document. It is clear that usage of fossil fuels has icreased over the years and it is understood that the future will not different. As for renewable energy sources, the amount of consumption has changed slightly. And, according to report in the future the usage of renewable energy will not change considerably. Petrol and oil usage had risen from 35 quadrillion units to nearly 40 quadrillion units by 2008, while over the same time period figures for coal usage increased from almost 16 quadrillion units to virtually 25 quadrillion units. From 1980 to 2008 the figures for natural gas comsumption have seen negitable icrease. When it comes to renewaş energy sources, nuclear energy consumption saw approximately twofold rise, whereas proportions of solar/wind energy and hydropower usage had hardly changed until 2008.
The line graph demonstrates
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in the USA since 1980 It is including forecasts by 2030.
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Datas
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from a 2008 document.

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clear
that
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of fossil fuels has
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icreased
over the years and it
is understood
that the future will not
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different
. As for renewable
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sources, the amount of consumption has
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changed
slightly
. And, according to report in the future the
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usage
of renewable
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energy
will not
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change
considerably
.

Petrol and oil
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had risen from 35 quadrillion
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units
to
nearly
40 quadrillion
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units
by 2008, while over the same time period figures for coal
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increased from almost 16 quadrillion
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units
to
virtually
25 quadrillion
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units
. From 1980 to 2008 the figures for natural gas
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comsumption
have
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seen
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negitable
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icrease
.

When it
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comes
to
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renewaş
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energy
sources, nuclear
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consumption
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saw
approximately twofold rise, whereas proportions of solar/wind
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energy
and hydropower
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had hardly
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changed
until 2008.
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IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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6.0
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