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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. pR633
The given line graph illustrates data from a report in 2008 regarding energy consumption in the USA since 1980 with predictions until 2030. Overall, fossil fuels have shown increases in consumption since the start of the period, with expectations for even more reliance on these fuel sources. Cleaner energy sources have accounted for considerably less consumption with predictions for a similar trend. Regarding fossil fuels such as coal, natural gas, petrol and oil, they have seen steady increases in energy consumption since 1980. Petrol and oil started at 35 quadrillion units in 1980, then fluctuated until 2000, at which point they rose steadily with a prediction of over 45 quadrillion units by 2030. Additionally, coal followed a similar rising trend. It is predicted that it will have surpassed 30 quadrillion units by 2030. Natural gas usage demonstrated fluctuations and it is set to level off at around 24 quadrillion units from 2020 onwards. In contrast, cleaner energy fuel sources all began the period at under 5 quadrillion units and showed declines in their use, with the exception of nuclear, which climbed slightly to 6 quadrillion units in 2005 with solar/wind expecting to see slight increases. Hydropower is projected to remain relatively unchanged until 2030.
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energy
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in the USA since 1980 with predictions until 2030.

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fuels
have shown increases in
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consumption
since the
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start
of the period, with expectations for even more reliance on these
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sources. Cleaner
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energy
sources have accounted for
considerably
less
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consumption
with predictions for a similar trend.

Regarding fossil
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fuels
such as coal, natural gas, petrol and oil, they have
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seen
steady increases in
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consumption
since 1980. Petrol and oil
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started
at 35 quadrillion
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units
in 1980, then fluctuated until 2000, at which point they rose
steadily
with a prediction of over 45 quadrillion
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units
by 2030.
Additionally
, coal followed a similar rising trend. It
is predicted
that it will have surpassed 30 quadrillion
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units
by 2030. Natural gas usage demonstrated fluctuations and it
is set
to level off at around 24 quadrillion
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from 2020 onwards.

In contrast
, cleaner
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energy
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fuel
sources all began the period at under 5 quadrillion
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and
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showed
declines in their
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units
in 2005 with solar/wind expecting to
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slight increases. Hydropower
is projected
to remain
relatively
unchanged until 2030.

IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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