Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion XGPJw

The Line graphs illustrate the number of students enrolled, international and local in Australian Universities from 2001 to 2010 on the basis of totals and commencing. Overall, the number of enrollments of local students was much higher than overseas students. However, the commencing rates for both types of students were less than the total number of enrollments. In the graph, it can be noticed that in 2001, 20000 foreign students applied to Australian Universities. In contrast, commencing numbers were slightly lower(i. earound 17000) than the total applied and for all the years. Also, it can be seen that for every three years there is a 20000 increase in the number of international students. In the case of commencing numbers, they were always less than students enrolled in each respective year, and quite interestingly about half of the students enrolled. Coming to local students, it can be seen that commencing rates were always lower than the total enrolments and remained stable at 200000 with some fluctuations. However, the total number of applications was 400000 in 2001 and it increased rapdly to 600000 until 2007, when it remained constant over the end of the period.

The Line graphs illustrate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 enrolled, international and local in Australian Universities from 2001 to 2010 on the basis of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
totals
 and commencing.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of enrollments of local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 was much higher than overseas You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 rates for both types of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 were less than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of enrollments.

In the graph, it can be noticed
 that in 2001, 20000 foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 applied to Australian Universities. In contrast
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 were slightly
 lower(i. Possible spelling mistake found.aroundagrounde aroundea round
earound
 17000) than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
 applied and for all the years. Also
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that for every three years there is a 20000 increase in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of international You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. In the case of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
, they were always less than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 enrolled in each respective year, and quite interestingly
 about half of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 enrolled.

Coming to local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinitiatebegininauguratetake uplaunch
commencing
 rates were always lower than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
Possible spelling mistake. 'enrolments' is British English.enrollments
enrolments
 and remained stable at 200000 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fluctuations. However
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withentireoutrightfulloverallunlimitedsheer
total
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of applications was 400000 in 2001 and it increased Possible spelling mistake found.rapidlyraptly
rapdly
 to 600000 until 2007, when it remained constant over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. 