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The glance at the diagram shows how to the manufacturing instant noodles.

The glance at the diagram shows how to the manufacturing instant noodles. j5ejy

The glance at the diagram shows how to the manufacturing instant noodles. Overall, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that the process instant noodles involves 8 stages, commenting with storing raw ingredients and culminating with noodles being packaged for later consumption. Looking at the diagram in more detail, in the first step, flour is pumped from a truck into tower silos for storage before being put into a mixing machine, where it is mixed with water and oil. This mixture was then rolled into dough sheets before being cut into dough strips and put out noodles discs. In the six stage of the process, noodles soaked in cooking oil and dried. The noodles, vegetables, and spices were then added to the cups. Before being given to customers for sale, they are labeled and sealed.

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 how to the manufacturing instant noodles.

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noodles
 involves 8 stages, commenting with storing raw ingredients and culminating with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
being packaged
 for later consumption.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, in the first
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before
being put
 into a mixing machine, where it is mixed
 with water and oil. This mixture was then rolled into dough sheets This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into dough strips and put out You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 discs.

In the six stage of the process, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 soaked in cooking oil and dried. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
, vegetables, and spices were then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the cups. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
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given
 to customers for sale, they are labeled
 and sealed. 