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Chart Sales: Week of October 7-13 Tues $2,450 $1,800 Wed $2,595 $3,445 Thurs $2,375 $1,000 Fri. $2,500 $4,350 Mon $2,400 Set. $1,950 $2,000 Lunch Dinner

Chart Sales: Week of October 7-13 Tues $2, 450 $1, 800 Wed $2, 595 $3, 445 Thurs $2, 375 $1, 000 Fri. $2, 500 $4, 350 Mon $2, 400 Set. $1, 950 $2, 000 Lunch Dinner OrKlG
The chart shows about the restaurant of sales week of October 7 to 13 i. e from Monday to Sunday. On weekday lunch and dinner peaked on Friday then suddenly fallen down on weekend. There was rapid increase from day to day for the lunch sales. The highest sales occurred on Friday and lowest on Sundaythere was a sudden lowest sale on weekends. For the dinner sales was much higher compared to the lunch sales on Monday it was $3623 and there was rapid high on Friday for $4350 and it suddenly fallen down on weekends. On weekdays that are on Wednesday the lunch sales there was high profit sales $2595 compared to Tuesday and Thursdays. Coming to dinner on Thursday there was $3800 there was less on Tuesday and Wednesday. Whole week there was high profit on Fridays and less profit on weekends. Sunday’s lunch and dinner sales compared were less Friday sales only.
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week of October 7 to 13 i. e from Monday to Sunday. On weekday lunch and
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peaked on Friday then
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fallen down on weekend.

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. The highest
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occurred on Friday and lowest on
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on weekends. For the
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was much higher compared to the lunch
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on Monday it was $3623 and there was rapid high on Friday for $4350 and it
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fallen down on weekends.

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there was high profit
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$2595 compared to Tuesday and Thursdays. Coming to
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on Thursday there was $3800 there was less on Tuesday and Wednesday. Whole week there was high profit on Fridays and less profit on weekends. Sunday’s lunch and
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compared were less Friday
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